Seeking Input on a New Screencast: “The ‘Other’ Mormon Heroes”

John Dehlin Mormon

I’m working on a new screencast similar to the others I’ve released to date (“Why they leave” and “Blacks and the LDS Priesthood“). This one is entitled: “The Other Mormon Heroes: What a Difference a Few Decades Can Make” — and it runs about 45 minutes (takes a few minutes to load).

It is in VERY rough form, but I’d love any feedback any of you are willing to offer. I’m specifically interested in things like:

  • Where do I get the history wrong?
  • How do I make it more interesting/effective?
  • How can I improve the tone?

Also, this one should work w/ Firefox and Mac.

Thanks in advance